Super - sentences

Hi Blog World,
In Killeen class we have been working on descriptive writing. This is my super- sentences. In this we change sentences up. Please give me some feedback. Please click on the link to view the sentences. Something I found tricky about this was dropping in chunks and alliterating it. But I managed to do it. If you could write some sentences like that, what would it be.


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